Kingdom Hearts Unchained χ: Difference between revisions

I was taught that it is grammatically incorrect to join two phrases like that (comma + "but" or "and"). This is because the phrase you're attaching, "contains in-app purchases," is not a complete sentence on its own.
(Slight grammar clean-up, though otherwise ENX's edits really made it better. Note, we don't need "it" all the time, especially when in a series/list)
(I was taught that it is grammatically incorrect to join two phrases like that (comma + "but" or "and"). This is because the phrase you're attaching, "contains in-app purchases," is not a complete sentence on its own.)
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'''''Kingdom Hearts Unchained Key''''' is a ''Kingdom Hearts'' game exclusive to the iOS and Android smartphone platforms. It is scheduled for release in 2015 and features plot and gameplay elements from the Japan-exclusive web browser game ''[[Kingdom Hearts χ]]''. Like ''Kingdom Hearts χ'', ''Kingdom Hearts Unchained Key'' is free to play, but contains in-app purchases. It will be the first ''Kingdom Hearts'' game to be released on smartphone platforms.  
'''''Kingdom Hearts Unchained Key''''' is a ''Kingdom Hearts'' game exclusive to the iOS and Android smartphone platforms. It is scheduled for release in 2015 and features plot and gameplay elements from the Japan-exclusive web browser game ''[[Kingdom Hearts χ]]''. Like ''Kingdom Hearts χ'', ''Kingdom Hearts Unchained Key'' is free to play, but it contains in-app purchases. It will be the first ''Kingdom Hearts'' game to be released on smartphone platforms.  


''Kingdom Hearts Unchained Key'' was first announced on May 12, 2015.<ref>http://www.siliconera.com/2015/05/12/kingdom-hearts-unchained-xchi-announced-for-smartphones/</ref>
''Kingdom Hearts Unchained Key'' was first announced on May 12, 2015.<ref>http://www.siliconera.com/2015/05/12/kingdom-hearts-unchained-xchi-announced-for-smartphones/</ref>
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