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{{UE|time=18:20, March 16, 2010 (UTC)~|text=I'm a little confused reading the Origin section of this article. It mentions that Hook is annoyed of "his" singing. Who is "he"? This antecedent is in need of a name. Was Captain Hook annoyed of his own singing? Or was he annoyed of someone else's singing? Somebody please clarify. Or I might do it...}}
{{UE|time=18:20, March 16, 2010 (UTC)~|text=I'm a little confused reading the Origin section of this article. It mentions that Hook is annoyed of "his" singing. Who is "he"? This antecedent is in need of a name. Was Captain Hook annoyed of his own singing? Or was he annoyed of someone else's singing? Somebody please clarify. Or I might do it...}}
{{EO|time=19:02, March 16, 2010 (UTC)|text=The previous line states "He shoots one of his own men," who ''was'' shot because his singing annoyed Hook. The sentence should read "Hook shoots one his own men because he's annoyed by the man's singing."}}

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You can also leave the Opposite armour battle at will to by enterting the back alley 81.23.48.110 01:25, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Are you certain about this ? TNÉ En avant Bravo ! 01:29, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Yep , done it before

Origin

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UnknownEnigma - In the meantime, would you be interested in meeting another who is considered a hero?
TALK - Your existence is worth nothing!
I'm a little confused reading the Origin section of this article. It mentions that Hook is annoyed of "his" singing. Who is "he"? This antecedent is in need of a name. Was Captain Hook annoyed of his own singing? Or was he annoyed of someone else's singing? Somebody please clarify. Or I might do it...

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Eternal Nothingness XIII - Terra Master Symbol.png You have to be strong. Strength of heart will carry you through the hardest of trials.
TALK - What I do, I do for friendship. — 19:02, March 16, 2010 (UTC)
TerraCharm.pngThe previous line states "He shoots one of his own men," who was shot because his singing annoyed Hook. The sentence should read "Hook shoots one his own men because he's annoyed by the man's singing."