Editing Forum:Character Page Improvement

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{{GS|time=23:17, October 8, 2009 (UTC)|talktext=Alright, so since we're all going to be improving character articles, this is the place to choose which articles you're going to be working on.  Try not to pick too many at once, just take a few at a time.  When you're finished, let me know either here or on my talk page, and I'll go over it to make sure that everything is done in the proper fashion.  All articles should have a great introductory paragraph, and the sections should be done in the following way:

* Journal Entries
* Story
* Personality
* Appearance
* Fighting Style (If necessary.)
* Origin (Make it brief, with any non-Kingdom Hearts related material linked from Wikipedia.  We don't need to know every event that goes on in the films, just describe the character's first appearance and roll.)
* Trivia

Let me know which characters you'll be working on below, and I'll make a list of who is doing what.}}

'''EO'''
*<s>[[Hercules]]</s>
*<s>[[Hades]]</s>
*<s>[[Megara]]</s>
*[[Philoctetes]]
*[[Pegasus]]
*[[Rock Titan]]
*[[Ice Titan]]
*[[Auron]]
*[[Pain and Panic]]
*[[Leon]]
*[[Yuffie]]
*[[Tifa]]
*[[Sephiroth]]
*[[Cloud]]
*[[Zack]]

'''GS'''
*[[Alice]]
*[[Queen of Hearts]]
*<s>[[White Rabbit]]</s>
*[[Card Soldier]]
*[[Doorknob]]
*[[Cheshire Cat]]

'''Yer mom'''
*[[Tarzan]]
*[[Jane]]
*[[Clayton]]
*[[Kala]]
*[[Kerchak]]
*[[Terk]]
*[[Sabor]]

'''LevL'''
*[[Jack Sparrow]]
*[[Will Turner]]
*[[Elizabeth Swann]]
*[[Captain Barbossa]]
*[[Undead Pirates]]

'''Xion4ever'''
*<s>[[Aladdin]]</s>
*[[Jasmine]]
*[[Jafar]]
*[[Genie]]
*[[Iago]]
*[[Abu]]
*[[Carpet]]
*[[The Peddler]]

'''DoorToNothing'''
*[[Chien Po]]
*[[Li Shang]]
*[[Ling]]
*[[Mulan]]
*[[Mushu]]
*[[Shan-Yu]]
*[[The Emperor]]
*[[Yao]]

'''HeartOfOblivion'''
*[[Ariel]]
*[[Sebastian]]
*[[Flounder]]
*[[King Triton]]
*[[Ursula]]
*[[Flotsam and Jetsam]]
*[[Prince Eric]]
*[[Glut]] (not much to do though)

==Discussion==

{{EO|time=23:22, October 8, 2009 (UTC)|talktext=Oh, dammit! I beat you to it... but two times the fun, I guess. I'll handle :

*Halloween Town characters
*Lion King characters
*Space Paranoids characters
*Deep Jungle characters

And that's it for now. We aren't redoing Donald, Mickey, Goofy, etc., are we? Those lengthy pages would be a bit of a hassle for one guy, wouldn't you say?}}
{{GS|time=23:25, October 8, 2009 (UTC)|text=Whoa, don't you think that's a little much at once?  Just take a few specific characters for now and see if you can handle those first.}}
{{EO|time=23:28, October 8, 2009 (UTC)|happytext=Look who's talkin', "Mr. 90 Uploads per Minute"! But ok. Let's start with the Halloween Town Characters for me.}}
{{Firaga44|sad=I'd love to help with i don't think i can help with it i'm not good at writing details.<small>*mutters to self*i hate being being useless</small>.}}
{{LevL|text=Can I help with the Port Royal characters?}}
{{yer mom|time=18:27, October 13, 2009 (UTC)|text=I'd like to help too so I'm adding myself up there with Deep Jungle characters ñ.n}}
I guess I would want to help out with Beast's Castle and Dwaf SWoodlands characters hwn I have the time, however since many of the Dwarf Woodlands characters' roles are still not clear, I will just pick the sections I know best about each character.- Qlwjeremy
I'm sorry... I don't feeel like helping now................- Qlwjeremy

Actually, I wanto help now, but I will just pick the character pages one by one and edit them.
-Qlwjeremy
{{LevL|text=I tried to improve Jack Sparrow's page. Is it good, or does something have to be changed? If it's not good yet, I'll try to make it better.}}
{{GS|time=20:04, November 8, 2009 (UTC)|text=The opening paragraph needs to be re-written.  Opening paragraphs don't need to include the origin, they just need to explain who the character is and what their role is.}}
{{LevL|text=Is it better now?}}

I'm SUPER new here but I noticed a mistake on Xemnas's page and if I edit it I don't want to screw it up. In the Trivia where it said that "Xemnas, Saix and Luxord" were the three Nobodies that Yen Sid showed to Sora, it's Xemnas, Saix and Xaldin. At least, that's how it is in the Americanised version. Please let me know if I'm right or not.-SweetNothingness   --[[User:SweetNothingness|True, we don&#39;t have hearts, but we remember what it was like, that&#39;s what makes us special.]] 13:09, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Hey, its me. Remember me? the guy that does nothing? well thats gonna change. Starting with this. What will you have me do? [[User:Number XXI|Number XXI]] 22:09, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Hey, Maybe we could add little videos or pictures of the limits for party characters. Not to downplay any vivid limit descriptions, but like they say, a pictures worth a thousand words! [[User:Number XXI|Number XXI]] 02:12, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

{{EO|time=22:10, November 17, 2009 (UTC)|talktext=I've switched to Olypmus Coliseum characters, as they had yet to be taken, and I was in an "Olympus" editing mood today. They just seem easier for some reason. Count on Halloween Town being my next project, however. As for the Coliseum, it's 3 down, 6 to go.}}
{{NinjaSheik|text=Oh, yeah! I saw those. You did a really great job on those!}}
{{EO|time=10:52, November 18, 2009 (UTC)|happytext=Why, thank you!}}
{{NinjaSheik|happy=You're welcome!}}

{{Number XXI|text= um, Anyone listen to what I said?}}

All right. I'll do Beast's Castle and Dwarf Woodlands characters.
-Qlwjeremy

{{NinjaSheik|text=We also need to start put info on the characters that appeared in ''358/2 Days'' and tell them of their role. Same thing for the worlds.}}
{{TNE|time=23:49, November 25, 2009 (UTC)|text=Should the MOS be modified too ?}}
{{NinjaSheik|text=MOS?}}
{{TNE|time=23:55, November 25, 2009 (UTC)|text=Manual of Style, in case we are modifying the format already preset there.}}
{{NinjaSheik|text=I guess.}}

I can handle any and all of the Appearance sections if you'd like. Got plenty of time and I'm much less useful when it comes to the other sections. Thatokay with everyone? [[User:LapisScarab|LapisScarab]] 00:08, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

{{NinjaSheik|text=Fine with me!}}
{{TNE|time=11:07, November 26, 2009 (UTC)|text=If there are any characters which need modifying, I'll be happy to help ! And once the pages are done, I'll modify the Characters section of the MOS accordingly, if we actually departed from the original.

Damn, I sound like a lawyer already. :P}}
{{NinjaSheik|text=Agreed.}}

{{Xion4ever|time=02:59, November 29, 2009 (UTC)|texx=Put me down for the Agrabah characters.}}
{{LevL|text=I'm done with Jack, Will, Elizabeth and Barbossa. Are those pages good?}}
{{TNE|time=00:02, November 30, 2009 (UTC)|happytext=I'd say ! Keep up the good work, guys.}}
{{DTN|time=02:20, November 30, 2009 (UTC)|text=I'll take on The Land of Dragons characters. I used to be a "Mulan" semi-junkie, so I'll have the knowledge from the movies to write more in-depth backstory/origin sections.}}

{{LapisScarab|time=23:33, January 1, 2010 (UTC)|text=Okay, I have a list of the Appearance sections I have complteted so far on my user page, and the ones I'm probably doing next.}}

{{HOO|time=06:31, January 5, 2010 (UTC)|text=I can do the Atlantica characters. Lord knows I've watched that movie so many times.}}