Forum:Character Page Improvement

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Guardian Soul Talk. — Then I shall make you see... That your hopes are nothing. Nothing but a mere illusion! - 23:17, October 8, 2009 (UTC) Alright, so since we're all going to be improving character articles, this is the place to choose which articles you're going to be working on. Try not to pick too many at once, just take a few at a time. When you're finished, let me know either here or on my talk page, and I'll go over it to make sure that everything is done in the proper fashion. All articles should have a great introductory paragraph, and the sections should be done in the following way: Journal Entries Story Personality Appearance Fighting Style (If necessary.) Origin (Make it brief, with any non-Kingdom Hearts related material linked from Wikipedia. We don't need to know every event that goes on in the films, just describe the character's first appearance and roll.) Trivia Let me know which characters you'll be working on below, and I'll make a list of who is doing what.

EO

• Hercules
• Hades
• Megara
• Philoctetes
• Pegasus
• Rock Titan
• Ice Titan
• Auron
• Pain and Panic
• Leon
• Yuffie
• Tifa
• Sephiroth
• Cloud
• Zack

GS

• Alice
• Queen of Hearts
• White Rabbit
• Card Soldier
• Doorknob
• Cheshire Cat

Yer mom

• Tarzan
• Jane
• Clayton
• Kala
• Kerchak
• Terk
• Sabor

LevL

• Jack Sparrow
• Will Turner
• Elizabeth Swann
• Captain Barbossa
• Undead Pirates

Xion4ever

• Aladdin
• Jasmine
• Jafar
• Genie
• Iago
• Abu
• Carpet
• The Peddler

DoorToNothing

• Chien Po
• Li Shang
• Ling
• Mulan
• Mushu
• Shan-Yu
• The Emperor
• Yao

HeartOfOblivion

• Ariel
• Sebastian
• Flounder
• King Triton
• Ursula
• Flotsam and Jetsam
• Prince Eric
• Glut (not much to do though)

Discussion

Eternal Nothingness XIII - I'm not afraid of what the darkness holds now. Even if you do wrest control of my heart from me, even if you cast me into the deepest, darkest abyss, you'll never sway me from the one cause that pushes me to keep on fighting. Whatever the cost, I'm ready to pay it. TALK - There's darkness within me... So what does that matter? I know I'm strong enough to hold it back. — 23:22, October 8, 2009 (UTC) Oh, dammit! I beat you to it... but two times the fun, I guess. I'll handle : Halloween Town characters Lion King characters Space Paranoids characters Deep Jungle characters And that's it for now. We aren't redoing Donald, Mickey, Goofy, etc., are we? Those lengthy pages would be a bit of a hassle for one guy, wouldn't you say?

Guardian Soul Talk. — Don't I even warrant a hello? It's such a shame. The Organization used to be the rope that bound us together. - 23:25, October 8, 2009 (UTC) Whoa, don't you think that's a little much at once? Just take a few specific characters for now and see if you can handle those first.

Eternal Nothingness XIII - The three of us can never be torn apart, all right? I'll always find a way. TALK - When I really need you, Ven, I know you'll be there. — 23:28, October 8, 2009 (UTC) Look who's talkin', "Mr. 90 Uploads per Minute"! But ok. Let's start with the Halloween Town Characters for me.

Firaga44 - Bye...Sora. TALK - Sometimes I wish to escape reality that ain't happening anytime soon.... I'd love to help with i don't think i can help with it i'm not good at writing details.*mutters to self*i hate being being useless.

LevL Fear my mighty instruments! Can I help with the Port Royal characters?

Yer mom - SOMOS HOMBRES O PAYASOS!!!! TALK - 18:27, October 13, 2009 (UTC) I'd like to help too so I'm adding myself up there with Deep Jungle characters ñ.n

I guess I would want to help out with Beast's Castle and Dwaf SWoodlands characters hwn I have the time, however since many of the Dwarf Woodlands characters' roles are still not clear, I will just pick the sections I know best about each character.- Qlwjeremy I'm sorry... I don't feeel like helping now................- Qlwjeremy

Actually, I wanto help now, but I will just pick the character pages one by one and edit them. -Qlwjeremy

LevL Fear my mighty instruments! I tried to improve Jack Sparrow's page. Is it good, or does something have to be changed? If it's not good yet, I'll try to make it better.

Guardian Soul Talk. — Don't I even warrant a hello? It's such a shame. The Organization used to be the rope that bound us together. - 20:04, November 8, 2009 (UTC) The opening paragraph needs to be re-written. Opening paragraphs don't need to include the origin, they just need to explain who the character is and what their role is.

LevL Fear my mighty instruments! Is it better now?

I'm SUPER new here but I noticed a mistake on Xemnas's page and if I edit it I don't want to screw it up. In the Trivia where it said that "Xemnas, Saix and Luxord" were the three Nobodies that Yen Sid showed to Sora, it's Xemnas, Saix and Xaldin. At least, that's how it is in the Americanised version. Please let me know if I'm right or not.-SweetNothingness --True, we don't have hearts, but we remember what it was like, that's what makes us special. 13:09, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Hey, its me. Remember me? the guy that does nothing? well thats gonna change. Starting with this. What will you have me do? Number XXI 22:09, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Hey, Maybe we could add little videos or pictures of the limits for party characters. Not to downplay any vivid limit descriptions, but like they say, a pictures worth a thousand words! Number XXI 02:12, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Eternal Nothingness XIII - I'm not afraid of what the darkness holds now. Even if you do wrest control of my heart from me, even if you cast me into the deepest, darkest abyss, you'll never sway me from the one cause that pushes me to keep on fighting. Whatever the cost, I'm ready to pay it. TALK - There's darkness within me... So what does that matter? I know I'm strong enough to hold it back. — 22:10, November 17, 2009 (UTC) I've switched to Olypmus Coliseum characters, as they had yet to be taken, and I was in an "Olympus" editing mood today. They just seem easier for some reason. Count on Halloween Town being my next project, however. As for the Coliseum, it's 3 down, 6 to go.

NinjaSheik - All of this might have started with a lie...But I'm really am glad that I could meet you... TALK - One day, the light-it will be ours, and it will bring us together. Til then, I'll be in your heart... Oh, yeah! I saw those. You did a really great job on those!

Eternal Nothingness XIII - The three of us can never be torn apart, all right? I'll always find a way. TALK - When I really need you, Ven, I know you'll be there. — 10:52, November 18, 2009 (UTC) Why, thank you!

NinjaSheik - All of this might have started with a lie...But I'm really am glad that I could meet you... TALK - Don't worry. You might forget about me...But, with our promise, I'll come back. You're welcome!

Number XXI - Prepare to scream! TALK - Best holiday wishes from Jack Skellington, the Pumpkin King! um, Anyone listen to what I said?

All right. I'll do Beast's Castle and Dwarf Woodlands characters. -Qlwjeremy

NinjaSheik - All of this might have started with a lie...But I'm really am glad that I could meet you... TALK - One day, the light-it will be ours, and it will bring us together. Til then, I'll be in your heart... We also need to start put info on the characters that appeared in 358/2 Days and tell them of their role. Same thing for the worlds.

Should the MOS be modified too ? Helping others always comes before asking others for help. • TroisNyxÉtienne — 23:49, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

NinjaSheik - All of this might have started with a lie...But I'm really am glad that I could meet you... TALK - One day, the light-it will be ours, and it will bring us together. Til then, I'll be in your heart... MOS?

Manual of Style, in case we are modifying the format already preset there. Helping others always comes before asking others for help. • TroisNyxÉtienne — 23:55, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

NinjaSheik - All of this might have started with a lie...But I'm really am glad that I could meet you... TALK - One day, the light-it will be ours, and it will bring us together. Til then, I'll be in your heart... I guess.

I can handle any and all of the Appearance sections if you'd like. Got plenty of time and I'm much less useful when it comes to the other sections. Thatokay with everyone? LapisScarab 00:08, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

NinjaSheik - All of this might have started with a lie...But I'm really am glad that I could meet you... TALK - One day, the light-it will be ours, and it will bring us together. Til then, I'll be in your heart... Fine with me!

If there are any characters which need modifying, I'll be happy to help ! And once the pages are done, I'll modify the Characters section of the MOS accordingly, if we actually departed from the original. Damn, I sound like a lawyer already. :P Helping others always comes before asking others for help. • TroisNyxÉtienne — 11:07, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

NinjaSheik - All of this might have started with a lie...But I'm really am glad that I could meet you... TALK - One day, the light-it will be ours, and it will bring us together. Til then, I'll be in your heart... Agreed.

Put me down for the Agrabah characters. Xion4ever Santa Claus has the right idea. Visit people once a year — 02:59, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

LevL Fear my mighty instruments! I'm done with Jack, Will, Elizabeth and Barbossa. Are those pages good?

I'd say ! Keep up the good work, guys. I'm as good as new! All my functions have been restored! • TroisNyxÉtienne — 00:02, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

DoorToNothing — I dreamed last night... I got on the boat to Heaven! And by some chance, I had brought my dice along! — 02:20, November 30, 2009 (UTC) I'll take on The Land of Dragons characters. I used to be a "Mulan" semi-junkie, so I'll have the knowledge from the movies to write more in-depth backstory/origin sections.

LapisScarab - You accept darkness, yet choose to live in the light. So why is it that you loathe us who teeter on the edge of nothing? We who were turned away by both light and dark - never given a choice? TALK - That may be... however, what other choice might we have had? Okay, I have a list of the Appearance sections I have complteted so far on my user page, and the ones I'm probably doing next.

HeartofOblivion Talk to me! — There was something important... Oh yes! I've decided on the pancakes. Blueberry! Can you get me some cotton candy? Blue, not PINK !!!! — 06:31, January 5, 2010 (UTC) I can do the Atlantica characters. Lord knows I've watched that movie so many times.

BebopKate - This one is Zazzles...because he's Zazzy! TALK - Here's your cat...and here's your $20...23:14, January 5, 2010 (UTC) Just a polite reminder that this wiki only covers a character as far as the Kingdom Hearts games are concerned; summaries of a character related to their original film(s) don't cover our scope or purpose and should not be included. A link to wikipedia's coverage of the film should be more than adequate for our purposes. That said, these are all shaping up nicely, guys. Great work all around. ^_^

Eternal Nothingness XIII - You have to be strong. Strength of heart will carry you through the hardest of trials. TALK - What I do, I do for friendship. — 23:49, January 5, 2010 (UTC) I have to disagree with you there, BebopKate. While I respect your opinion and what you state is true, just a random link is a tad sloppy. We all ready have the link to the movie summary, where people could get an idea as to a character's role through that. However, I think it'd be fair if we did as we did, keeping a short and sweet summary of their debut appearance, and debut appearance only.

LapisScarab - You accept darkness, yet choose to live in the light. So why is it that you loathe us who teeter on the edge of nothing? We who were turned away by both light and dark - never given a choice? TALK - That may be... however, what other choice might we have had? Been on an edit high in the past two/threedays and finished up the Atlantica characters' appearance sections and half of the Final Fantasy characters. I also put a complete list of the characters that are without an appearance section, organized by world, on my user page.

Under the Character's personalities and abilities, do I delete any information from the films?-Qlwjeremy