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Improving the tense and wording a bit. Not sure if that first sentence should be in the past tense or not, but I put it that way to fit with the rest of the section, which takes place in the past.

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 ===Before ''Kingdom Hearts Birth by Sleep''===
 [[File:Flashback Ventus Wakes Up 01 KHBBS.png|thumb|left|Aqua watches a comatose Ventus.]]
-Aqua, alongside Terra, is one of Eraqus's pupils. Like Terra, Aqua also has a dream of becoming a Keyblade master.
+Aqua, alongside Terra, was one of Eraqus's pupils. Like Terra, Aqua also had a dream of becoming a Keyblade master.
-One day, a suspicious man named [[Master Xehanort]] arrived and gave Eraqus a new apprentice to work with named Ventus. Terra calls out to Aqua, telling her that a new apprentice had just arrived. While chatting with Ven, Aqua and Terra asked Ven about why he wanted to train to become a Keyblade master, but this question, as well as a few other questions, troubled Ven, so much that he couldn't take the pressure. He fainted and shocked Aqua and Terra.
+One day, a suspicious man named [[Master Xehanort]] arrived and gave Eraqus a new apprentice to work with, a boy named Ventus. Terra called out to Aqua and told her that a new apprentice had just arrived. Aqua and Terra tried to converse with Ven and asked him about why he wanted to train to become a Keyblade master. The questions troubled Ven to the point that he couldn't take the pressure. He fainted and shocked Aqua and Terra.
-Eraqus tells Aqua and Terra that the reason Ven fainted was because he lost his memories. Aqua decided to look after Ven, in case he woke up. Many days passed, but despite Ven being unable to awaken, Aqua would not abandon him. One day, Aqua saw Ven open his eyes and regain consciousness. Overjoyed, she quickly informed a worried Terra and Master Eraqus.
+Eraqus told Aqua and Terra that the reason Ven fainted was because he had lost his memories. Aqua decided to look after Ven, in case he woke up. Many days passed and, despite Ven being unable to awaken, Aqua did not abandon him. One day, Aqua saw Ven open his eyes and regain consciousness. Overjoyed, she quickly informed a worried Terra and Master Eraqus.
-Since that day, she developed a very close relationship with Ventus, acting much like his older sister and becoming very protective of him. A couple years pass, and the three of them forge a strong bond with each other.
+Since that day, Aqua developed a very close relationship with Ventus, acting much like his older sister and becoming very protective of him. A couple years pass, and the three of them forge a strong bond with each other.
 ===''Kingdom Hearts Birth by Sleep''===