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The Design/Appearance sections have a little more squeeze room when it came to real-world references like that. Calling it fur instead of repeating "body" or "skin" over and over flows better. I get where you're coming from though, that's why I tend to use phrases like "seems to be" when describing something that looks obvious. If we have to change it, how about this?:
A Sniper Wild is a feminine, monkey-like Heartless with a predominantly pink body. The pink sections of its body are covered by white stripes, its torso is brown, its hands and feet are black. It wears brown and tan bracelets and armlets, a gold choker, two gold hoop earrings, and a violet bow. Its face is pitch-black and its eyes are glowing yellow. The Sniper Wild carries a small slingshot as a weapon and its Heartless emblem is emblazoned on its chest.
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