Talk:Captain Hook: Difference between revisions
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{{UE|time=18:20, March 16, 2010 (UTC)~|text=I'm a little confused reading the Origin section of this article. It mentions that Hook is annoyed of "his" singing. Who is "he"? This antecedent is in need of a name. Was Captain Hook annoyed of his own singing? Or was he annoyed of someone else's singing? Somebody please clarify. Or I might do it...}} | {{UE|time=18:20, March 16, 2010 (UTC)~|text=I'm a little confused reading the Origin section of this article. It mentions that Hook is annoyed of "his" singing. Who is "he"? This antecedent is in need of a name. Was Captain Hook annoyed of his own singing? Or was he annoyed of someone else's singing? Somebody please clarify. Or I might do it...}} | ||
{{EO|time=19:02, March 16, 2010 (UTC)|text=The previous line states "He shoots one of his own men," who ''was'' shot because his singing annoyed Hook. The sentence should read "Hook shoots one his own men because he's annoyed by the man's singing."}} | {{EO|time=19:02, March 16, 2010 (UTC)|text=The previous line states "He shoots one of his own men," who ''was'' shot because his singing annoyed Hook. The sentence should read "Hook shoots one his own men because he's annoyed by the man's singing."}} | ||
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You can also leave the Opposite armour battle at will to by enterting the back alley 81.23.48.110 01:25, September 11, 2009 (UTC)
Yep , done it before
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