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:::::"Before Sulley can destroy the door" -- phrasing it this way implies that Sora is trying to compete with Sulley. "This time" instead implies that Sora is suggesting an alternative solution. | :::::"Before Sulley can destroy the door" -- phrasing it this way implies that Sora is trying to compete with Sulley. "This time" instead implies that Sora is suggesting an alternative solution. | ||
:::::Including the comma between "film" and the movie title is not grammatically correct as far as I can find. | :::::Including the comma between "film" and the movie title is not grammatically correct as far as I can find. | ||
:::::What other Disney character articles do should ''not'' be the metric for what is proper to do. What the MoS says to do should be. I disagree with going into to much non-KH detail, as "Mr. Waternoose" isn't going to mean much to a reader unless they already know what the Origin section is trying to inform them. However, I would support it if we used the main template to link to the movie's wikipedia article ''within'' the origin section, in addition to the lede -- that way, we're providing the reader a clear way to inform themselves on the jargon we're using.{{User:KrytenKoro/Sig}} 15:00, 18 March 2019 (UTC) | :::::What other Disney character articles do should ''not'' be the metric for what is proper to do -- especially since none of the articles you gave as examples are rated as "good articles" (two of them are even articles for KH3 characters, and still under construction!). What the MoS says to do, should be the metric. I disagree with going into to much non-KH detail, as "Mr. Waternoose" isn't going to mean much to a reader unless they already know what the Origin section is trying to inform them. However, I would support it if we used the main template to link to the movie's wikipedia article ''within'' the origin section, in addition to the lede -- that way, we're providing the reader a clear way to inform themselves on the jargon we're using.{{User:KrytenKoro/Sig}} 15:00, 18 March 2019 (UTC) |
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