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Cococrash, I don't think you realize just how much work re-writing that section would be for ''anyone''. It's over twice the size of the original section. It also wasn't written from a neutral standpoint like information on en encyclopedia should be. I can take a look at it for you, but there'll probably be some big sections cut out.--'''''[[User:LapisScarab|<span style="color:navy;">Lapis of</span>]][[User talk:LapisScarab|<span style="color:darkred;">the Night</span>]]''''' 01:48, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
Cococrash, I don't think you realize just how much work re-writing that section would be for ''anyone''. It's over twice the size of the original section. It also wasn't written from a neutral standpoint like information on en encyclopedia should be. I can take a look at it for you, but there'll probably be some big sections cut out.--'''''[[User:LapisScarab|<span style="color:navy;">Lapis of</span>]][[User talk:LapisScarab|<span style="color:darkred;">the Night</span>]]''''' 01:48, January 16, 2010 (UTC)


Okay, I looked it over, and removing the sections that are just ''describing'' the world instead of talking about Days takes away a big chunk. Even bigger are the sections that aren't even talking about The World That Never Was, instead, they talk about the Organization members'' activities in Days. In short, what is on the page now is fine.--'''''[[User:LapisScarab|<span style="color:navy;">Lapis of</span>]][[User talk:LapisScarab|<span style="color:darkred;">the Night</span>]]''''' 02:03, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, I looked it over, and removing the sections that are just ''describing'' the world instead of talking about Days takes away a big chunk. Even bigger are the sections that aren't even talking about The World That Never Was, instead, they talk about the Organization members activities in Days. In short, what is on the page now is fine.--'''''[[User:LapisScarab|<span style="color:navy;">Lapis of</span>]][[User talk:LapisScarab|<span style="color:darkred;">the Night</span>]]''''' 02:03, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
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