Editing Talk:La Cité des Cloches
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*You may want to revise the story so it sounds more like a story rather than a quick after-thought (it shouldn't sound like: "By the way, this happened, but there's nothing to say about it, but I'm putting it in anyways"). I've written an example, based around the translated TGS trailer that you may wish to use instead: | *You may want to revise the story so it sounds more like a story rather than a quick after-thought (it shouldn't sound like: "By the way, this happened, but there's nothing to say about it, but I'm putting it in anyways"). I've written an example, based around the translated TGS trailer that you may wish to use instead: | ||
**"At some point during his visit to La Cité des Cloches, Riku approaches Quasimodo in the courtyard outside the cathedral. Quasimodo is carrying an unconscious Esmeralda in his arms, and when Riku asks where the Dream Eaters went, he says they went to the rooftop of the cathedral. After the Gargoyle is seen flying high above, Riku runs into the cathedral as Quasimodo states that he'll fight as well." | **"At some point during his visit to La Cité des Cloches, Riku approaches Quasimodo in the courtyard outside the cathedral. Quasimodo is carrying an unconscious Esmeralda in his arms, and when Riku asks where the Dream Eaters went, he says they went to the rooftop of the cathedral. After the Gargoyle is seen flying high above, Riku runs into the cathedral as Quasimodo states that he'll fight as well." | ||
*About the color of the ''KH3D'' template: Not to keen on such a dark color scheme. We might want to find one that works better and is closer to the "game colors." | |||
*Regarding the Spanish comic: Should we do an "Other Apperances" section mentioning everything relevant to it? | *Regarding the Spanish comic: Should we do an "Other Apperances" section mentioning everything relevant to it? | ||