Editing Talk:Enter the Void
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*In the lead, I don't think "Mickey Mouse Club March" needs to be in quotation marks. | *In the lead, I don't think "Mickey Mouse Club March" needs to be in quotation marks. | ||
*I think that the Appearance section should be written in a bulleted list instead of prose (think "Learning" sections of ability | *I think that the Appearance section should be written in a bulleted list instead of prose (think "Learning" sections of ability sections). | ||
*What's the distinction between the "Summary" and "Details" sections? My thoughts are all musical technical information should be in a "Composition" section and any information to do with artists, origin and etymology should just be in the lead. | *What's the distinction between the "Summary" and "Details" sections? My thoughts are all musical technical information should be in a "Composition" section and any information to do with artists, origin and etymology should just be in the lead. | ||