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| == Story == | | == Story == |
| Kaxrm, Laurxa, Gellax, and Zipaxz want control over O.F., so at the next meeting they banish the other members to the realm of darkness. There is another organization, Organization Infitety(I think that's how it's spelled). O.F. goes on missions, some are to take out O.I. members. Along the way they find out that in the depths of Castle Oblivion heartless made of pure light have harnessed the ability to destroy memorys. O.I. makes a replica of Laurxa. Gellax and Laurxa battle the replica, they win. Zipaxz becomes in charge of the replica program. He makes 3 replicas Naminé, Ventus, and Bob. Zipaxz quits O.F. His replica of Ven becomes a very famous oboe player. On one mission to Castle Oblivion, Gellax and Laurxa find a brainless. Brainless are mutated heartless, of people who where very smart. It is very big and they don't want to battle it so they leave. On their next mission they find it again, but this time they have to battle it. They finish battling it and leave. Later the Organization finds out about the link break. All the members get a second weapon. Laurxa and Kaxrm go to Destiny Islands, and capture Naminé and Roxas. Laurxa becomes able to control somthing called Sensless, the weakest ones look like purple sheep. The Ven Replica is killed by Kaxrm. Laurxa becomes in charge of the replica program. They find out that Naminé and Bob replica were killed. Laurxa creates a new replica of Ven. Kaxrm tells of something called the cleansing where they all go to become more powerful. After the cleansing they attack the O.I stronghold where they find that the leaders and body gaurds are the Oringanal members of O.F. After Kaxrm and Zipaxz attack Xobb, Kaxrm jumps in the way of a magic attack that would of killed Zipaxz reminds him of his promise and tells him to get out of there. He then attacks and apparently kills Xobb. Later as they are escaping they all collapse and each of them is holding a keyblade, then they get their real weopons back and wonder what happened. Then Xobb following suit of final fantasy bosses reapears and then Kaxrm attacks him again. Before they strike they start to fade and Kaxrm crypticly tells them "when we meet again.....dont hold back". Before fading away he strikes Xobb and then dissapears. | | Kaxrm, Laurxa, Gelax, and Zipaxz want control over O.F., so at the next meeting they banish the other members to the realm of darkness. There is another organization, Organization Infitety(I think that's how it's spelled). O.F. goes on missions, some are to take out O.I. members. Along the way they find out that in the depths ofCastle Oblivion heartless made of pure light have harnessed the ability to destroy memorys. O.I. makes a replica of Laurxa. Gelax and Laurxa battle the replica, they win. Zipaxz becomes in charge of the replica program. He makes 3 replicas Namine, Ventus, and Bob. Zipaxz quits O.F. His replica of Ven becomes a very famus oboe player. On one mission to Castle Oblivion, Gelax and Laurxa find a brainless. Brainless are mutated heartless, of people who where very smart. It is very big and they don't want to battle it so they leave. On their next mission they find it again, but this time they have to battle it. They finish battling it and leave. Later the organization finds out about the link break. All the members get a second weapon. Laurxa and Kaxrm go to Destiny Islands, and capture Namine and Roxas. Laurxa becomes able to control somthing called Sensless, the weakest ones look like purple sheep. The Ven Replica is killed by Kaxrm. Laurxa becomes in charge of the replica program. They find out that The Namine and Bob replica were killed. Laurxa creates a new replica of Ven. Kaxrm tells of something called the cleansing where they all go the become more powerful. After the cleansing they attack the O.I stronghold where they find that the leaders and bodie gaurds are the Oringanal members of O.F. After Kaxrm and Zipaxz attack Xobb Kaxrm jumps in way of a magic attack that would of killed Zipaxz and reminds him of his promise and tells him to get out of there. He then attacks and apparently kills Xobb. Later as they are escaping they all collapse and each of them is holding a keyblade then they get there real weopons back and wonder what happens. Then Xobb following suit of final fantasy bosses reapears and then Kaxrm attacks him again. Before they strike they start to fade and Kaxrm crypticly tells them "when we meet again.....dont hold back. Before fading away he strikes Xobb and then dissapears. |
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| LAURXA- She often gets in fights with Zipaxz, usually over who should be in charge of the replica program. She has power over sand. | | LAURXA- She often gets in fights with Zipaxz, usually over who should be in charge of the replica program. She has power over sand. |
| Weapon- Light Blue chakrams. Like everyone else once they deafet Xobb can use keyblades. green claymore. | | Weapon- Light Blue chakrams. Like everyone else once they deafet Xobb can use keyblades. green claymore. |
| Looks: Blonde hair, Blue eyes, Pale white skin. Wears a black coat most of the time, but somtimes she wears green skirt, green jacket, black t-shirt. She always wears a red headband.
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| ZIPAXZ- Weapon- Pizza,Keyblades | | ZIPAXZ- Weapon- Pizza,Keyblades |
| Looks: Like axel exept has purple hair
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| Zipaxz's origional self was friends with Xobb's origional self.
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| Zipaxz's origional self was born in Radient Gardens.
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| KAXRM(pronounced Kaxe-rim)- weapon- Swords that absorb blood,Keyblades. After the takeover was the leader of the organization. Often went on solo missions and even tried to defeat Sora. Extremely powerful and can control Bloodscarce. Can be mysterious and will use others for his own will. His true name is Mark and he was a genaral in the keyblade war. wields the power of blood and fire and can turn into a bloodverse type humanoid. The closest hes had to being touchy to anyone besides hoxtams his nephew was a promise to Zipaxz to protect him. Has strange visions about a man claiming that Kaxrm is "his", and has some connection to axel. | | KAXRM(pronounced Kaxe-rim)- weapon- Swords that absorb blood,Keyblades. After the takeover was the leader of the organization. Often went on solo missions and even tried to defeat Sora. Extremely powerful and can control Bloodscarce. Can be mysterious and will use others for his own will. His true name is Mark and he was a genaral in the keyblade war. wields the power of blood and fire and can turn into a bloodverse type humanoid. The closest hes had to being touchy to anyone besides hoxtams his nephew was a promise to Zipaxz to protect him. Has strange visions about a man claiming that Kaxrm is "his", and has some connection to axel. |
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| VAXDIS- Weapon: Dark blades. Vaxdis has power over darkness.
| | == Commets on This == |
| | Does anyone think this would make a good KH game? And please feel free to post any commets.:) |
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| XOBB- Weapon: etheral blades
| | im not gonna start [[User:Khruler|Khruler]] 15:45, May 30, 2010 (UTC) |
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| KRIXEN- Weapon: double sided sword power over MONKEYS!
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| == More about the Senseless ==
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| The senseless are controlled by Laurxa(Of coarse if you've read the story you know that).
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| All of the sensless look like sheep.
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| Purple sheep have power of flowers,
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| Dark blue sheep have power over water.
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| Does anyone think this would make a good KH game? And please feel free to post any commets( if they're nice).:)
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| im not gonna start [[User:Khruler|Khruler]] 15:45, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
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| Yes i do wanna know why cause im Kaxrm! Hey laurxa made a few tweaks and added my profile. And to the person above me shut up ever heard of having fun? go jump off a cliff. | | Yes i do wanna know why cause im Kaxrm! Hey laurxa made a few tweaks and added my profile. And to the person above me shut up ever heard of having fun? go jump off a cliff. |
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| Hey! It's Laurxa! person who posteed the commet above, SHUT UP! stop posting commets that ar'nt nice, because some of us really like this idea. GOT IT MEMORIZED! | | Hey! It's Laurxa! person who posteed the commet above, SHUT UP! stop posting commets that ar'nt nice, because some of us really like this idea. GOT IT MEMORIZED! |
| {{Pea14733|time=10:36, June 27, 2010 (UTC)|text= So, what do you really want us to do? Play it? No. Is it interesting? No.}}
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| i said that i wasn't trying to be rude oh and that "person who posteed the commet above, SHUT UP!" thing that's not nice [[User:Khruler|Khruler]] 23:55, June 27, 2010 (UTC)
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| '''It's Laurxa! Can people please stop posting mean commets.
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| If you don't have anything nice to post about this, don't post anything at all, because their is a lot of people who really like this idea.
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| And once I had a dream that they made this into a DS game. GOT IT MEMORIZED PEOPLE?!'''
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| {{AxelLivesOn|angry= This is getting way out of hand. They weren't trying to be rude, but were just saying their opinion. It is a Forum after all.}}
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| But people should stop posting rude commets. GOT IT MEMORIZED!?
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| And I have one friend who doesn't really know that much about KH and She likes this idea.
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| {{AxelLivesOn|time=15:52, June 28, 2010 (UTC)|hooded= I don't know if it's just me, but it looks like you are the one saying mean things on here. And if you stop saying "Shut up" then maybe we'll stop.}}
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| It's Laurxa,Again. I'm sorry for saying shut up, but I only said that once. I'm the one that keeps saying got it memorized. Kaxrm is the one that said to jump of a cliff, not me.
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| {{AxelLivesOn|time=15:59, June 28, 2010 (UTC)|hooded= I say just drop it. No more of this nonsense. It even says at the top of this section that only ''NICE'' comments are allowed.}}
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| Has everyone stoped posting mean commets? If so thank you people. :)
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| |time=''I just obtained a potion! — {{{1:25, June 25, 2010}}}''
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| |text= You ''do'' realize that there's a KH fan fiction wiki, somewhere in the internet, right? And I don't want to be rude but, Nomura is the creator of the KH series, so if you want your story to be a game(Which I doubt)send it to Nomura}}
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| i love the purple sheep!!!!!!!
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| Okay guys (I'm not sure which one of you is saying "shut up"), let's all just chill for a second, alright? No one said your idea was stupid (and technically, Pea said "it wasn't interesting"), infact I'm pretty sure that we all think it is very creative. What I think Khruler was getting at was that talking about our own personal Kingdom Hearts fantasies on a fan based forum is somewhat taboo. There's nothing wrong with it, but while we all have our own fantasies and think they are pretty great, we also have our doubts, so we are a bit nervous or uneasy about letting anyone else know about them, simply because we don't want to hear anyone tell us "that's stupid" or "dream on". But when we try to avoid those situations, we eventually end up telling our selves those very words that we don't want to hear. And when we someone else tells us their ideas, because they are not our own or don't make sense acording to our logic, we usually turn them away. But, in that sense, I think that the few people who do share their ideas like you are the really bold ones of these forums, and if you ever have the intention of telling Nomura or anyone else deeply involved in the KH franchise about your ideas, I say go for it, because although it might not get made into a game (few fan-based story requests ever do, although bits and piesces of multiple ones can be worked in, but then it doesn't even resemble any of those ideas at all), I'm sure that Nomura would enjoy learning of someone else's story as well. And if that doesn't work out, there's a;ways FanFiction.net. Either way, don't feel ashamed or insulted or attacked upon, because outspoken examples like these incourage others to do the same. Infact, I might consider putting a thread on my own fantasy and see everyone elses' opinions (but I won't press my luck). One more thing, although "SHUT UP" and "go jump off a cliff" are harsh catch phrases, "Got it memorized" is a total keeper, just don't over do it. [[User:AROS|AROS]] 13:45, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
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| It's Laurxa! How could I send this idea to Nomura? PLEASE TELL ME!!!!!!!!
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| you could e-mail him probably won't work but give it a shot[[User:Khruler|Khruler]] 22:43, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
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| square-enix@orbit.sqexmail.com[[User:Khruler|Khruler]] 22:48, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
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| His that his real e-mail? Or are you joking with me? Can I really trust you?
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| well that's not HIS e-mail i am a member on Sqare enix.com i get updates on games and i looked at the email just try it [[User:Khruler|Khruler]] 22:53, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
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| and if that doesn't work try a nd see if he has a face book page[[User:Khruler|Khruler]] 23:27, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
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| |text= I really doubt Nomura has a facebook page(since he’s working on the new KH games and FF titles) If this does not work, you could always use Google.}}
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| {{LapisScarab|time=22:45, June 30, 2010 (UTC)|text=The Kingdom Hearts Fanon Wiki is the more appropriate place for this. You may want to try putting it there.}}
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| Well, the site's a bit under development, and even though it is asking for contribution, it kind of looses other people's intersets and therefore never updates or expands and thus becomes self destructive. Then again, I could be thinking of a different wikia. Still, point is, ironiclly, the wikia's that don't have much but ask for contributions cause others to lose interset and never help it. But I guess we had to start from somewhere. [[User:AROS|AROS]] 22:25, July 2, 2010 (UTC)
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| So I hated this
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| AT THE TOP IT SAYS NO MEAN COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| {{Maggosh|nathan=You're more than welcome to move your story to the [[wikia:kingdomheartsfanon:Kingdom Hearts Fanon Wiki|Kingdom Hearts Fanon Wiki]].}}
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| The idea for this has just been e-mailed!!!
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| The idea for this is now on the kingdomheartsfanonwikia
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| Me and Freaky Beserker have been trying to send this idea to Square Enix,but it seems the e-mail we've been given is a fake, so does anyone know how we could send them the idea?--[[User:Laurxafinal|Laurxafinal]] 22:37, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
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| So, nobody has any idea how This idea could be sent?--[[User:Laurxafinal|Laurxafinal]] 19:30, December 5, 2010 (UTC)
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| {{Brett|text=I just don't think Nomura would be at all interested in doing an Organization retread for part of a future game. While I'm glad your idea satisfies your friends and you (and that's important above all), I just don't think returning to a storyline already visited and repeating it in a way would be detrimental to the series. Keep writing though and coming up with more ideas. Even if the ideas are never approved, accepted, etc., it's important for people to keep a series alive in their own way by putting their own spin on it. Best of luck.}}
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| {{Keyblade0|time=[[User:Keyblade0|Keyblade0]] 23:14, December 6, 2010 (UTC)|happy=I think Square-Enix or Nomura opened up a Facebook Account. Maybe you should go to the account. Try googling it.}}
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| Not very helpful, don't have facebook--[[User:Laurxafinal|Laurxafinal]] 17:44, December 18, 2010 (UTC)
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| {{AROS|time=11:39|text=No, no, no. They don't have a facebook, they have a Twitter account. Everybody always gets so confused between the two.}}
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| don't have twitter, so, does anyone have anything helpful?--[[User:Laurxafinal|Laurxafinal]] 00:03, December 27, 2010 (UTC)
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| Could someone PLEASE help me send the idea?--[[User:Laurxafinal|Laurxafinal]] 18:00, February 12, 2011 (UTC)
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| {{Brett|text=No, thank you. As much fun as your extremely derivative Organization XIII retread would be in the hands of gaming geniuses, I'm going to choose to let this golden opportunity pass me by. I'm quite the fool.}}
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| {{LA|Vtext=You are more than welcome to add this story to the [http://kingdomheartsfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Kingdom_Hearts_Fanon_Wiki Kingdom Hearts Fanon Wiki].}}
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| It is on the khfanon wiki. And, can someone PLEASE help. We'll keep asking untill someone does. --[[User:Laurxafinal|Laurxafinal]] 15:35, 20 March 2011 (EDT)
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| Sorry to ask again, but does anyone know?? And we do have this on the KHfanon wikia, we even have multiple OF stories(5 total). --[[User:Laurxafinal|Laurxafinal]] 21:52, 7 June 2011 (EDT)
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| {{Galexgan|time=02:02, 9 June 2011 (EDT)|terra2= Not saying anything rude, just critiquing (And what good artist can live without being critiqued?). I personally don't love the story, mostly the brianless thing, I dunno, that just throws it way off for me. I mean, I had an idea for a being that was kind of being who was a lesser Nobody but gained a heart of their own thereby not creating neccesarily a somebody but while not being a Nobody or Heartless either. In the end it would be a being of the Heart, a being of light, being that not of dark like the Heartless or of nothing like the Nobodies. I digress... the idea of a really smart person becoming a Heartless and having a unique type of Heartless doesn't sound very well thought through to me. The key to KH is, the succes is in the details. A complex tory which keeps unfolding and actually answering our questions instead of like most tv shows or book or games which leave it just to the imagination. I was a writing a fanfic myself but due to events that were fuzzy before, being explained, like exactly why Roxas had feelings and nobody (get it... hur hur. XP) else did, threw my accurate story out the window as just another could have been story. So I stopped. A second point I wanted to bring up is Gelax? Is that supposed to be a play off of my character? Galexgan? (Also know as Galex often for short in the fanfic. Along with Gale.) I love hearing peoples ideas but your posting this for people to speak on about the ideas and I'm giving you my honest opinion, it could be better, just needs a little more thinking through, no matter how many people think it's great, there's gonna be alot more I'd say that don't agree. Revise your ideas some and then try sending it, could be pretty good then. And no, no permition to use my ughh... what do I call it, Lightbody? Heartfilled? Somebody? Thing... I dunno. I want to propose an idea of my own to the wiki'ers for a wiki-wide roleplay. (Check the wiki suggestions forum for my idea, I think it would best belong there...) }}
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| I didn't like the brainless either(but my brother just had to have them in the story). It's kinda hard at times with there being 9 people helping with the story to write it and it be good, because we all want different stuff in the story. We rarly all aggre on the stuff(especially the 2nd OF where Kaxrm dies). None of us have ever heard of your character Galexgan untill now, so we are not trying to copy or anything. I'm thinking about rewriting the begaining a little to inclue more detail about before the takeover(but it'll stay the same here, just rewriting in on the fanon wikia). And acctually some of the OF characters do have feelings, there a special type of nobody can't remember what their called though(it doesn't say on the fanon wikia, and I'm not the head writer so I don't know everything). Sorry if it seems like we're copying of of someone else's fan fic, but trust me, we're not. We're trying our best to NOT copy. --[[User:Laurxafinal|Laurxafinal]] 11:42, 9 June 2011 (EDT)
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| {{Galexgan|time=18:04, 9 June 2011 (EDT)|terra2= I just thought it was funny how similar it was. XP Not blaming you of ripping any ideas, it's all cool. Just thought it was neat-ish if ya'll did because then that'd mean I made a cool character that other wanted to use. :P Nah hahah, anyway. Yeah, if you revise the story of some things I would say who knows, you might have a chance with Nomura, but at present (In the great words of L and Near of Death Note.) 'It's a 7% chance.' }}
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| Thanks for saying there's a 7% chance at the moment, that's more than anyone else has said. I'm working on coming up with ideas for when I rewrite it(if the one in charge will let me). --[[User:Laurxafinal|Laurxafinal]] 19:14, 9 June 2011 (EDT)
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| {{AROS|time=15:02|text=Just be careful about basing characters and places off of things in real life because if they get too familiar, "You'll lose your sense of reality and be sucked into the dream." (-Inception). ... LAWLS, J.K. Well, maybe not, but I know I should becareful about that since I'm basing my characters on myself and a few others that I know and at least three of the worlds are based off of real places (a common one being a ghost-town of an all too familiar Theme Park that we all know and love (wink)). But, in another sense, it makes it more closer to possibility as well, in the possitive sense. But in my opinion, I believe you have more than a 7% chance. That's right, you deserve... an 8% chance!!! Not much, but they are both lucky (7 being, well, duh, and 8 being Axel, who has got to be one of the luckiest Nobodies out there), so be proud (But not to proud!)!}}
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