Editing Forum:Character Article Improvements

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{{LightRoxas|samus=Hi all! I've been browsing a variety of character pages lately, and noticed several of the notable characters have somewhat low quality articles. I tried to work on a couple of these pages, but I know for a fact I'm not too good of a writer, especially when it comes to in-universe story sections. I know a lot of people are busy working on the Walkthrough space, but it would be great if some of our better writers could help me out on this.

These articles notably need improvement:
*[[Sora]]: Story section needs to be in-universe, and all around improved.
*[[Ventus]]: Story section needs cleanup and Abilities section needs work.
*[[Riku]]: Story section needs to be in-universe,  and Personality and Appearance sections better organized.
*[[Roxas]]: Story section needs cleanup, and Personality section could be condensed.
*[[Namine]]: Completely unrelated, but she could use an article in the Gallery-space.

Again, I'm more than willing to help out on this, but having some better writers behind me would probably make things better.}}
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 These articles notably need improvement:
-*<s>[[Sora]]: Story section needs to be in-universe, and all around improved.</s>
+*[[Sora]]: Story section needs to be in-universe, and all around improved.
 *[[Ventus]]: Story section needs cleanup and Abilities section needs work.
 *[[Riku]]: Story section needs to be in-universe,  and Personality and Appearance sections better organized.
 *[[Roxas]]: Story section needs cleanup, and Personality section could be condensed.
-*[[Naminé]]: Completely unrelated, but she could use an article in the Gallery-space.
+*[[Namine]]: Completely unrelated, but she could use an article in the Gallery-space.
 Again, I'm more than willing to help out on this, but having some better writers behind me would probably make things better.}}
-{{Chitalian8|time=21:42, 4 October 2011 (UTC)|neku= The Mickey article also needs to finished being merged with the Timeless River Mickey. Mickey also needs a personality section. I could go about working on some of the sections if I have the time, as I've been swamped with schoolwork this week.}}
-{{Xion4ever|time=04:13, 5 October 2011 (UTC)|text=How about this then? User(s) can work on a individual page then post something like "Hey, so-and-so and I have finished the story section on <insert page(s) here>. Could someone check that out?" Normally, people are going to check the edit summaries of each page. However, if you guys want to compile a list here and get feedback on it, go for it. </reference to [[Forum:Character Page Improvement]]>
-I've been going through some of the character articles adding/building on personality sections...If you run across a page that doesn't have a personality section, it's probably on my to-do list.}}
-{{LightRoxas|lucky=Alright, I've officially started working on [[Sora]]'s page. When I get done I'll start with Riku. Anyone else can begin work on the others if they so desire.
-EDIT 21:33, 8 October 2011 (UTC): I will cross off the ones I've finished, and an admin can look over the article and fix any thing that got left behind.}}