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not about making it shorter. It's about not just repeating the lines and stage movements the characters use. the section isn't describing what she''does'', it's describing what she says or is said to her. Review Sköll or Randall Boggs for example
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Undo revision 778003 by KrytenKoro (talk)Again, I remove most of the script regurgitation and just summarize what occur without feeling bloated and scene recreation
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that's still script regurgitation. Focus on how you'd describe the scene to a friend who hasn't heard of KH before.
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Undo revision 777966 by KrytenKoro (talk)Happy?
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not sure if this counts -- we usually allow nicknames that are used in journal, etc., but Meg is only used in script
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